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Little Did i Know!!

Your narration and writing style is great…u had a natural flow of story…
But end was very simple…u had a very large ground to play with twist and turn…but I think u r bored to continue or u wanna end it fast… except the last episode all other things are great.

One line review: A Blunt knife with sharp handle.:fingercross:
 
Your narration and writing style is great…u had a natural flow of story…
But end was very simple…u had a very large ground to play with twist and turn…but I think u r bored to continue or u wanna end it fast… except the last episode all other things are great.

One line review: A Blunt knife with sharp handle.:fingercross:
Thanks a lot for reading it and the extended review.. Will take the feedbacks to my next story. .. "Blunt knife with a sharp handle " That's kind of one awesome line to express the review... Am flattered
 
Thanks a lot for reading it and the extended review.. Will take the feedbacks to my next story. .. "Blunt knife with a sharp handle " That's kind of one awesome line to express the review... Am flattered
Yaaa I am eagerly waiting for your new story…:hearteyes: Don’t focus only on love story let it be a cocktail party if possible.
 
Yaaa I am eagerly waiting for your new story…:hearteyes: Don’t focus only on love story let it be a cocktail party if possible.
That's my kinda genre... Yeah but I will take your suggestions and write in others too!!!
 
Gang ila da couple :giggle: blue dress purchase pannala da innum,athan review varala:bandid:
Adingu!!!! Vanthu rendu per wall layum eyjavathu pannirven olunga vanthu review podunga.. Blue sattai illa na paravala oru yellow avathu potutu vanga da
 
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