Sweet burning Love

[Deena]

Oh my sweet, sweet love,
for you I would go beyond and above.

Oh how you ache in my chest,
yet you sit there comfortably, you've even made a nest.

Oh what do I do with you,
how can I find the peace and rest.

Oh you're burning so gentle,
I am trying hard but I cannot settle.

Oh I can feel you in my bones,
burning so strong you could melt stones.

Oh the stones of the walls I have built,
laid one by one with sorrow and guilt.

Oh if only I could set you free,
to dance and fly, as how you're supposed to be.

Oh you could move mountains and sea,
I can feel you getting restless, wanting to flee.

Oh my sweet, longing love,
I have no one to give you, no one I could think of.

Oh just a little bit more,
until then you have a home in me and in this poem.

 

[Nani2025]

Oh my sweet, sweet love,
for you I would go beyond and above.

Oh how you ache in my chest,
yet you sit there comfortably, you've even made a nest.

Oh what do I do with you,
how can I find the peace and rest.

Oh you're burning so gentle,
I am trying hard but I cannot settle.

Oh I can feel you in my bones,
burning so strong you could melt stones.

Oh the stones of the walls I have built,
laid one by one with sorrow and guilt.

Oh if only I could set you free,
to dance and fly, as how you're supposed to be.

Oh you could move mountains and sea,
I can feel you getting restless, wanting to flee.

Oh my sweet, longing love,
I have no one to give you, no one I could think of.

Oh just a little bit more,
until then you have a home in me and in this poem.

Wow...
What a writing..
It make's me feeling about

My heart beating when read those lines..

thanks for this beautiful poem

 

[Deena]

Wow...
What a writing..
It make's me feeling about

My heart beating when read those lines..

thanks for this beautiful poem

I am glad you like it, Nani.
Ty for the kind words

 

[Nani2025]

I am glad you like it, Nani.
Ty for the kind words

My pleasure
I'm very Happy to read those love words.
Post more love Poetry's
I'm waiting to read with my heart
Deena

 

[Brownieeee]

Oh my sweet, sweet love,
for you I would go beyond and above.

Oh how you ache in my chest,
yet you sit there comfortably, you've even made a nest.

Oh what do I do with you,
how can I find the peace and rest.

Oh you're burning so gentle,
I am trying hard but I cannot settle.

Oh I can feel you in my bones,
burning so strong you could melt stones.

Oh the stones of the walls I have built,
laid one by one with sorrow and guilt.

Oh if only I could set you free,
to dance and fly, as how you're supposed to be.

Oh you could move mountains and sea,
I can feel you getting restless, wanting to flee.

Oh my sweet, longing love,
I have no one to give you, no one I could think of.

Oh just a little bit more,
until then you have a home in me and in this poem.

So intense ⋆. ̊

 

[Deena]

My pleasure
I'm very Happy to read those love words.
Post more love Poetry's
I'm waiting to read with my heart
Deena

I will give my best to write more with love theme.

 

[Deena]

So intense ⋆. ̊

Thank you. Hope you enjoyed reading.

 

[Anshhi]

Oh my sweet, sweet love,
for you I would go beyond and above.

Oh how you ache in my chest,
yet you sit there comfortably, you've even made a nest.

Oh what do I do with you,
how can I find the peace and rest.

Oh you're burning so gentle,
I am trying hard but I cannot settle.

Oh I can feel you in my bones,
burning so strong you could melt stones.

Oh the stones of the walls I have built,
laid one by one with sorrow and guilt.

Oh if only I could set you free,
to dance and fly, as how you're supposed to be.

Oh you could move mountains and sea,
I can feel you getting restless, wanting to flee.

Oh my sweet, longing love,
I have no one to give you, no one I could think of.

Oh just a little bit more,
until then you have a home in me and in this poem.

Your 'sweet love' is like a quiet fire, which burns but does not end. You wrote beautifully!

Awesome Intelligence™​

 

[kanaa]

Oh my sweet, sweet love,
for you I would go beyond and above.

Oh how you ache in my chest,
yet you sit there comfortably, you've even made a nest.

Oh what do I do with you,
how can I find the peace and rest.

Oh you're burning so gentle,
I am trying hard but I cannot settle.

Oh I can feel you in my bones,
burning so strong you could melt stones.

Oh the stones of the walls I have built,
laid one by one with sorrow and guilt.

Oh if only I could set you free,
to dance and fly, as how you're supposed to be.

Oh you could move mountains and sea,
I can feel you getting restless, wanting to flee.

Oh my sweet, longing love,
I have no one to give you, no one I could think of.

Oh just a little bit more,
until then you have a home in me and in this poem.

"No one I could think of" — don't say that too loud
Some loves just need the right moment, the right person...
This poem gave me all the feels beautifully written, Deena

— Atom

 

[Deena]

Your 'sweet love' is like a quiet fire, which burns but does not end. You wrote beautifully!

Awesome Intelligence™​

Tyvm Anshhi for the kind words.

 

[Deena]

"No one I could think of" — don't say that too loud
Some loves just need the right moment, the right person...
This poem gave me all the feels beautifully written, Deena

— Atom

Thank you Kanaa for your insight and support.
Happy you enjoyed.