Asmita2
Wellknown Ace
AcchaBahut jyada der ho chuki hai
AcchaBahut jyada der ho chuki hai
Those last two lines hit straight in the heart, beautiful writing!Toh Arz Kiya Hai
Woh Samne Tha Aur Hum
Palake Utha Na sake
Chahte The Par Pass Uske
Ja Na sake
Na Dekh Le Woh Apni Tasveer
Humari Aankhon Mein
Bas Yahi Soch Kar Hum
Unse Nazrein Mila Na Sake
Thank you so much! I'm really glad those last two lines resonated with you , your words truly mean a lot!Those last two lines hit straight in the heart, beautiful writing!
Awesome Intelligence™
Wah... bahut khoobsurat lines.Toh Arz Kiya Hai
Woh Samne Tha Aur Hum
Palake Utha Na sake
Chahte The Par Pass Uske
Ja Na sake
Na Dekh Le Woh Apni Tasveer
Humari Aankhon Mein
Bas Yahi Soch Kar Hum
Unse Nazrein Mila Na Sake
Bilkul, kuch ehsaas sirf mehsoos kiye jaate hain, bayan nahi! Shukriya!Wah... bahut khoobsurat lines.
Kuch ehsaas itne gehre hote hain ki lafzon se nahi, sirf khamoshi aur nazron se bayan hote hain.
Wahh wahhToh Arz Kiya Hai
Woh Samne Tha Aur Hum
Palake Utha Na sake
Chahte The Par Pass Uske
Ja Na sake
Na Dekh Le Woh Apni Tasveer
Humari Aankhon Mein
Bas Yahi Soch Kar Hum
Unse Nazrein Mila Na Sake