You Let Me Bleed

[JeffJzz]

You held my heart like it was yours,
Whispered love through midnight doors.
Painted skies with shades so bright,
Then left me drowning in the night.

You let me bleed, but didn't see,
The scars you carved so carelessly.
A love once warm now turns to stone,
Yet here I stand, still all alone.

The echoes of your voice remain,
A haunting song, a sweet refrain.
I close my eyes, but there you are,
A wish upon a fallen star.

You let me bleed, yet here I stay,
Chasing dreams that fade away.
But love won't break me, not today
I'll find the light, I'll walk away.​

 

[THAMBRATTI]

You Let Me Bleed


You held my heart like it was yours,
Whispered love through midnight doors.
Painted skies with shades so bright,
Then left me drowning in the night.


You let me bleed, but didn’t see,
The scars you carved so carelessly.
A love once warm now turns to stone,
Yet here I stand, still all alone.


The echoes of your voice remain,
A haunting song, a sweet refrain.
I close my eyes, but there you are,
A wish upon a fallen star.


You let me bleed, yet here I stay,
Chasing dreams that fade away.
But love won’t break me, not today—
I’ll find the light, I’ll walk away.

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This poem is a heart-wrenching masterpiece. The way you've woven words to convey the pain of lost love, the scars of careless abandonment, and the resilience of the human spirit is simply breathtaking. The imagery is vivid, the emotions are raw, and the message is powerful. You've captured the bittersweet essence of love and the strength that lies within us to rise above the ashes. Bravo!

 

[JeffJzz]

This poem is a heart-wrenching masterpiece. The way you've woven words to convey the pain of lost love, the scars of careless abandonment, and the resilience of the human spirit is simply breathtaking. The imagery is vivid, the emotions are raw, and the message is powerful. You've captured the bittersweet essence of love and the strength that lies within us to rise above the ashes. Bravo!

Thank you

 

[THAMBRATTI]

Thank you

YOU ARE ALWAYS WELCOME JEFF

 

[Dɾҽαɱƈαƚƈԋҽɾ]

You held my heart like it was yours,
Whispered love through midnight doors.
Painted skies with shades so bright,
Then left me drowning in the night.

You let me bleed, but didn't see,
The scars you carved so carelessly.
A love once warm now turns to stone,
Yet here I stand, still all alone.

The echoes of your voice remain,
A haunting song, a sweet refrain.
I close my eyes, but there you are,
A wish upon a fallen star.

You let me bleed, yet here I stay,
Chasing dreams that fade away.
But love won't break me, not today
I'll find the light, I'll walk away.​

Beautiful Jeff

 

[Anshhi]

You held my heart like it was yours,
Whispered love through midnight doors.
Painted skies with shades so bright,
Then left me drowning in the night.

You let me bleed, but didn't see,
The scars you carved so carelessly.
A love once warm now turns to stone,
Yet here I stand, still all alone.

The echoes of your voice remain,
A haunting song, a sweet refrain.
I close my eyes, but there you are,
A wish upon a fallen star.

You let me bleed, yet here I stay,
Chasing dreams that fade away.
But love won't break me, not today
I'll find the light, I'll walk away.​

This poem is a beautiful and emotional expression of heartbreak and resilience. The lyrics convey a sense of longing and loss, yet also determination and strength.
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