It's An Improvised One Both I Have Only Written Because Before One My One Friend Said Not That Strong But He Likes This One So Please Share Your Opinions Which One Is Great?
(Before:-
Aakhon Ka Paani Sukh Gaya,
Abb Khoon Ke Aasu Roh Rha Hu.)
After:-
Aankhon mein dhundhla, ikraar ka gham hai,
Tere bina jeena, yeh ek bada sawaal hai.
Tune kaha tha saath mein rahenge hum,
Par kyun hai yeh dooriyan itni gehre gum?
(Before;-
Tum Mujhe Chod Kar Aise Kaise Chali Gayi)
After:-
Alvida keh gayi, bin bole chali gayi.
Ab tanha raat hai, andheron mein chhupa,
Zehar hai lafzon mein, jo teri taraf muda.
Ilzaam tera, dil ko bhari hai bhaari,
Pyaar ka sauda, kyun yeh itna bhatakti hai?
(Before:-
Meri Aatma Abb Mujh Mein Hee Nhi,
Yeh Deh Abb Tyag Rha Hu.)
After:-
Ek akela aadmi, khud se hi juda,
Manzilon ka kya kare, jab sapne toot gaya.
(Before:-
Aakhon Ka Paani Sukh Gaya,
Abb Khoon Ke Aasu Roh Rha Hu.)
After:-
Aankhon mein dhundhla, ikraar ka gham hai,
Tere bina jeena, yeh ek bada sawaal hai.
Tune kaha tha saath mein rahenge hum,
Par kyun hai yeh dooriyan itni gehre gum?
(Before;-
Tum Mujhe Chod Kar Aise Kaise Chali Gayi)
After:-
Alvida keh gayi, bin bole chali gayi.
Ab tanha raat hai, andheron mein chhupa,
Zehar hai lafzon mein, jo teri taraf muda.
Ilzaam tera, dil ko bhari hai bhaari,
Pyaar ka sauda, kyun yeh itna bhatakti hai?
(Before:-
Meri Aatma Abb Mujh Mein Hee Nhi,
Yeh Deh Abb Tyag Rha Hu.)
After:-
Ek akela aadmi, khud se hi juda,
Manzilon ka kya kare, jab sapne toot gaya.