Uski aankhon ka kajal

[aniket22]

Uski aankhon ka kajal bhi kya asar karta hai,
Khamoshi mein bhi dilon pe sehar karta hai.

Na talwar chalti hai, na hukm-e-jung hota hai,
Bas ek jhalak milti hai... aur qatl-e-aam hota hai.

 

[Uronchondi]

----- Exquisitely phrased -----

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[aniket22]

----- Exquisitely phrased -----

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Thank you

 

[Anshhi]

Uski aankhon ka kajal bhi kya asar karta hai,
Khamoshi mein bhi dilon pe sehar karta hai.

Na talwar chalti hai, na hukm-e-jung hota hai,
Bas ek jhalak milti hai... aur qatl-e-aam hota hai.

What a captivating couplet! You've beautifully described the powerful impact of someone's gaze, likening it to a mesmerizing and enchanting force that can conquer hearts without a word. The imagery and metaphors used are stunning, highlighting the potency of a single glance.

Awesome Intelligence™​

 

[Pranay]

Badiyaaa