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The Ghost In The Mirror

The Assassin

Athena's Assassin
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There it was , a ghost in the mirror
Suddenly the candles began to flicker


Harmony suddenly froze in absolute fear
The ghost wailed making Harmony shed a tear


Her skin felt so cold just like ice
The ghost even scared the little mice


The little mice ran into the hole in the wall
The ghost's moans and groans filled the hall

Harmony very slowly and quietly moved away
The ghost slammed the door shut , it wanted her to stay


Harmony pulled on the door handle trying to get out
The ghost was coming to get her , she had no doubt


Harmony threw herself out of the window and landed on the ground
Suddenly she came face to face with a ghostly hound


She screamed and ran back into the haunted house

Harmony jumped as she saw a little white mouse

She had a feeling that someone was watching and looked around
There it was again , it was the ghostly hound


Harmony screamed and ran up the staircase

She ran into the study and locked the door just incase

Suddenly she sensed a presence and a white light appeared
"Oh no not again" she thought as the ghost in the mirror reappeared


She unlocked the door and ran away as far as she could

Her screams echoing throughout the small neighborhood

The ghost in the mirror could finally rest
At least until the appearance of the next uninvited guest
 
There it was , a ghost in the mirror
Suddenly the candles began to flicker


Harmony suddenly froze in absolute fear
The ghost wailed making Harmony shed a tear


Her skin felt so cold just like ice
The ghost even scared the little mice


The little mice ran into the hole in the wall
The ghost's moans and groans filled the hall

Harmony very slowly and quietly moved away
The ghost slammed the door shut , it wanted her to stay


Harmony pulled on the door handle trying to get out
The ghost was coming to get her , she had no doubt


Harmony threw herself out of the window and landed on the ground
Suddenly she came face to face with a ghostly hound


She screamed and ran back into the haunted house
Harmony jumped as she saw a little white mouse

She had a feeling that someone was watching and looked around
There it was again , it was the ghostly hound


Harmony screamed and ran up the staircase
She ran into the study and locked the door just incase

Suddenly she sensed a presence and a white light appeared
"Oh no not again" she thought as the ghost in the mirror reappeared


She unlocked the door and ran away as far as she could
Her screams echoing throughout the small neighborhood

The ghost in the mirror could finally rest
At least until the appearance of the next uninvited guest
Perfect combo of thriller and horror! Just incredible writing.
Awesome Intelligence™
 
There it was , a ghost in the mirror
Suddenly the candles began to flicker


Harmony suddenly froze in absolute fear
The ghost wailed making Harmony shed a tear


Her skin felt so cold just like ice
The ghost even scared the little mice


The little mice ran into the hole in the wall
The ghost's moans and groans filled the hall

Harmony very slowly and quietly moved away
The ghost slammed the door shut , it wanted her to stay


Harmony pulled on the door handle trying to get out
The ghost was coming to get her , she had no doubt


Harmony threw herself out of the window and landed on the ground
Suddenly she came face to face with a ghostly hound


She screamed and ran back into the haunted house
Harmony jumped as she saw a little white mouse

She had a feeling that someone was watching and looked around
There it was again , it was the ghostly hound


Harmony screamed and ran up the staircase
She ran into the study and locked the door just incase

Suddenly she sensed a presence and a white light appeared
"Oh no not again" she thought as the ghost in the mirror reappeared


She unlocked the door and ran away as far as she could
Her screams echoing throughout the small neighborhood

The ghost in the mirror could finally rest
At least until the appearance of the next uninvited guest

I enjoyed how the poem gradually builds tension.

What caught my attention most was the ending; it almost feels like the ghost was lonely and simply waiting for someone to notice it.
 
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