Just one kiss

[Sweetheart]

The sky was dark, and the rain had just started. Tiny drops hit the car windows, making soft sounds. The city lights reflected on the wet roads, glowing red and gold.They had been driving for hours, laughing, singing, and flirting. It was supposed to be just a fun trip. Just two friends on the road.But now, something felt different.He looked at her. She was smiling, looking out the window, her hair falling over her shoulder. She looked peaceful. But when she turned to him, their eyes met—and everything felt quiet.Her smile changed. It was softer now."Pull over," she said.He didn’t say a word. He just turned the wheel and parked under a streetlight. The world outside kept moving, but inside the car, time slowed down.She leaned closer. So did he.Then… they kissed.
It was warm, soft, and full of feeling. At first, it was slow—like they were both surprised. Then it grew deeper, like they had been waiting for this moment for a long time.The windows fogged up. The rain got heavier.They kept kissing—sometimes in the front seat, sometimes laughing and pulling each other close in the back seat, not caring about anything else.The world outside didn’t matter. Just the sound of rain, soft music, and two hearts finally getting brave.Later, as they sat side by side, breathing slow again, she rested her head on his shoulder.“That was… something,” he said with a smile.
She looked up at him and whispered,
“Yeah. It really was.”

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[Anshhi]

The sky was dark, and the rain had just started. Tiny drops hit the car windows, making soft sounds. The city lights reflected on the wet roads, glowing red and gold.They had been driving for hours, laughing, singing, and flirting. It was supposed to be just a fun trip. Just two friends on the road.But now, something felt different.He looked at her. She was smiling, looking out the window, her hair falling over her shoulder. She looked peaceful. But when she turned to him, their eyes met—and everything felt quiet.Her smile changed. It was softer now."Pull over," she said.He didn’t say a word. He just turned the wheel and parked under a streetlight. The world outside kept moving, but inside the car, time slowed down.She leaned closer. So did he.Then… they kissed.
It was warm, soft, and full of feeling. At first, it was slow—like they were both surprised. Then it grew deeper, like they had been waiting for this moment for a long time.The windows fogged up. The rain got heavier.They kept kissing—sometimes in the front seat, sometimes laughing and pulling each other close in the back seat, not caring about anything else.The world outside didn’t matter. Just the sound of rain, soft music, and two hearts finally getting brave.Later, as they sat side by side, breathing slow again, she rested her head on his shoulder.“That was… something,” he said with a smile.
She looked up at him and whispered,
“Yeah. It really was.”

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The description is incredibly cinematic; it feels like the perfect movie moment where everything finally aligns.

Awesome Intelligence™​

 

[Daizy]

The sky was dark, and the rain had just started. Tiny drops hit the car windows, making soft sounds. The city lights reflected on the wet roads, glowing red and gold.They had been driving for hours, laughing, singing, and flirting. It was supposed to be just a fun trip. Just two friends on the road.But now, something felt different.He looked at her. She was smiling, looking out the window, her hair falling over her shoulder. She looked peaceful. But when she turned to him, their eyes met—and everything felt quiet.Her smile changed. It was softer now."Pull over," she said.He didn’t say a word. He just turned the wheel and parked under a streetlight. The world outside kept moving, but inside the car, time slowed down.She leaned closer. So did he.Then… they kissed.
It was warm, soft, and full of feeling. At first, it was slow—like they were both surprised. Then it grew deeper, like they had been waiting for this moment for a long time.The windows fogged up. The rain got heavier.They kept kissing—sometimes in the front seat, sometimes laughing and pulling each other close in the back seat, not caring about anything else.The world outside didn’t matter. Just the sound of rain, soft music, and two hearts finally getting brave.Later, as they sat side by side, breathing slow again, she rested her head on his shoulder.“That was… something,” he said with a smile.
She looked up at him and whispered,
“Yeah. It really was.”

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Well written

 

[Rasputin_M]

it's not like wow it's like ahem ahem haha iykyk

Dude learn to appreciate and not always criticizing. I have seen enough of your replies at other posts as well. All you do is condemn. If you cannot appreciate, then don't comment. HUH!!!!!!

 

[Rasputin_M]

Don't preach, you can report if there is any mistake or rules break.

Mate I will if you keep doing this.

 

[Rasputin_M]

Go ahead don't preach mister Rasputin

I am not preaching but learn to respect. If you cannot appreciate hold back. HUH!!!!!