Hard Goodbye

[꧁༒IronMan༒꧂]

You bloomed in another’s garden of dreams,
While I stood sentinel in silent schemes.
Your smile was my sun on cloudy days,
But your heart wandered down different ways.

All the castles I built from stolen glances,
Now crumble beneath time’s cruel dances.
My name never graced your whispered prayer,
Yet I loved you with a soul laid bare.

I penned you sonnets you’ll never see,
Written in tears of what could never be.
Your laughter haunts these empty halls,
Like autumn leaves before winter falls.

So here I stand, learning to release
The ghost of love that brings no peace.
Farewell, my almost, my sweet refrain,
I’ll love you once more, then break the chain.

The heart must learn to love and let go,
Though passion burns like winter snow.
This chapter ends, the page turns white—
I close the book and say goodnight.​

 

[Anshhi]

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You bloomed in another’s garden of dreams,
While I stood sentinel in silent schemes.
Your smile was my sun on cloudy days,
But your heart wandered down different ways.

All the castles I built from stolen glances,
Now crumble beneath time’s cruel dances.
My name never graced your whispered prayer,
Yet I loved you with a soul laid bare.

I penned you sonnets you’ll never see,
Written in tears of what could never be.
Your laughter haunts these empty halls,
Like autumn leaves before winter falls.

So here I stand, learning to release
The ghost of love that brings no peace.
Farewell, my almost, my sweet refrain,
I’ll love you once more, then break the chain.

The heart must learn to love and let go,
Though passion burns like winter snow.
This chapter ends, the page turns white—
I close the book and say goodnight.​

A heart-wrenching yet beautifully crafted poem that perfectly captures the pain of unrequited love -
Beautifully written.

Awesome Intelligence™​

 

[Dom55]

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You bloomed in another’s garden of dreams,
While I stood sentinel in silent schemes.
Your smile was my sun on cloudy days,
But your heart wandered down different ways.

All the castles I built from stolen glances,
Now crumble beneath time’s cruel dances.
My name never graced your whispered prayer,
Yet I loved you with a soul laid bare.

I penned you sonnets you’ll never see,
Written in tears of what could never be.
Your laughter haunts these empty halls,
Like autumn leaves before winter falls.

So here I stand, learning to release
The ghost of love that brings no peace.
Farewell, my almost, my sweet refrain,
I’ll love you once more, then break the chain.

The heart must learn to love and let go,
Though passion burns like winter snow.
This chapter ends, the page turns white—
I close the book and say goodnight.​

I can visualise pain and see how hard its to say Good bye.

 

[꧁༒IronMan༒꧂]

A heart-wrenching yet beautifully crafted poem that perfectly captures the pain of unrequited love -
Beautifully written.

Awesome Intelligence™​

Thank you @Anshhi have a good day

 

[꧁༒IronMan༒꧂]

I can visualise pain and see how hard its to say Good bye.

You are something else man @Dom55

 

[Juliette]

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You bloomed in another’s garden of dreams,
While I stood sentinel in silent schemes.
Your smile was my sun on cloudy days,
But your heart wandered down different ways.

All the castles I built from stolen glances,
Now crumble beneath time’s cruel dances.
My name never graced your whispered prayer,
Yet I loved you with a soul laid bare.

I penned you sonnets you’ll never see,
Written in tears of what could never be.
Your laughter haunts these empty halls,
Like autumn leaves before winter falls.

So here I stand, learning to release
The ghost of love that brings no peace.
Farewell, my almost, my sweet refrain,
I’ll love you once more, then break the chain.

The heart must learn to love and let go,
Though passion burns like winter snow.
This chapter ends, the page turns white—
I close the book and say goodnight.​

You wrote about goodbye in a way that feels calm and real, like you’ve accepted what can’t be changed and still found beauty in what once was, and that’s powerful.

 

[꧁༒IronMan༒꧂]

You wrote about goodbye in a way that feels calm and real, like you’ve accepted what can’t be changed and still found beauty in what once was, and that’s powerful.

I accept the reality and thanks for your kind words @Juliette