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Fallen Angel

Deena

Deena

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Darkness of the night engulfing her black wings
On a cliff high and cold, there she sits.

Shivering, aching, forgot for how long
Those who listen closely will hear her song.

Cold rain falling on her pale skin
Cut and bruised she smiles with a grin.

"Beware, stay away, as the night brings the pain,
With sorrow and regret my heart is stained.
Run.. flee.. these terrors are real,
Don't blink, the darkness will make you kneel."

Cursed by the heavens, denied by fate
Wanted to repent, only it was too late.

Now tormented by her thoughts and wrong choices,
fading memories, wailing voices.

Waiting for no one, knowing no one will come,
well aware of what she has become.

She opens the wings, flies high.. screams in all her might..
Closes her eyes as she surrenders..
And hugs the eternal night.
 
Deena said:
Darkness of the night engulfing her black wings
On a cliff high and cold, there she sits.

Shivering, aching, forgot for how long
Those who listen closely will hear her song.

Cold rain falling on her pale skin
Cut and bruised she smiles with a grin.

"Beware, stay away, as the night brings the pain,
With sorrow and regret my heart is stained.
Run.. flee.. these terrors are real,
Don't blink, the darkness will make you kneel."

Cursed by the heavens, denied by fate
Wanted to repent, only it was too late.

Now tormented by her thoughts and wrong choices,
fading memories, wailing voices.

Waiting for no one, knowing no one will come,
well aware of what she has become.

She opens the wings, flies high.. screams in all her might..
Closes her eyes as she surrenders..
And hugs the eternal night.
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Amazing dark poetry! Love it.
Awesome Intelligence™​
 
Deena said:
Darkness of the night engulfing her black wings
On a cliff high and cold, there she sits.

Shivering, aching, forgot for how long
Those who listen closely will hear her song.

Cold rain falling on her pale skin
Cut and bruised she smiles with a grin.

"Beware, stay away, as the night brings the pain,
With sorrow and regret my heart is stained.
Run.. flee.. these terrors are real,
Don't blink, the darkness will make you kneel."

Cursed by the heavens, denied by fate
Wanted to repent, only it was too late.

Now tormented by her thoughts and wrong choices,
fading memories, wailing voices.

Waiting for no one, knowing no one will come,
well aware of what she has become.

She opens the wings, flies high.. screams in all her might..
Closes her eyes as she surrenders..
And hugs the eternal night.
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A beautiful tragedy. The saddest part is not her fall, but the moment she stops waiting for someone to save her.​
 
Deena said:
Darkness of the night engulfing her black wings
On a cliff high and cold, there she sits.

Shivering, aching, forgot for how long
Those who listen closely will hear her song.

Cold rain falling on her pale skin
Cut and bruised she smiles with a grin.

"Beware, stay away, as the night brings the pain,
With sorrow and regret my heart is stained.
Run.. flee.. these terrors are real,
Don't blink, the darkness will make you kneel."

Cursed by the heavens, denied by fate
Wanted to repent, only it was too late.

Now tormented by her thoughts and wrong choices,
fading memories, wailing voices.

Waiting for no one, knowing no one will come,
well aware of what she has become.

She opens the wings, flies high.. screams in all her might..
Closes her eyes as she surrenders..
And hugs the eternal night.
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this!!! just touched me.. the way she expects no one to protect her from the evill and is fearless of it at a point such that she allows her to consume it..
and the part where she might have trusted n loved her mate and now is tainted by it..daamn!
 
Avaa said:
this!!! just touched me.. the way she expects no one to protect her from the evill and is fearless of it at a point such that she allows her to consume it..
and the part where she might have trusted n loved her mate and now is tainted by it..daamn!
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I like your interpretation of the poem. Thanks @Avaa :inlove:
 
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