A Sad Tale

[dogb]

Packed so tightly
Very little room
There are many
In this small tomb
May be related
Look all the same
Faceless heads
None with a name
When required
One will disappear
An awful sound
You will now hear
A puff of smoke
A distinctive smell
Ending will come
In a flame like hell
Keep disappearing
Until there is none
Survivors I doubt
There will be one
Maybe your heart
This now captures
A very sad tale
Of a box of matches

 

[Divyazzz]

Nice I have seen posts of you every post has some emotion and the way of writing is awesome

 

[Honey bunch]

Packed so tightly
Very little room
There are many
In this small tomb
May be related
Look all the same
Faceless heads
None with a name
When required
One will disappear
An awful sound
You will now hear
A puff of smoke
A distinctive smell
Ending will come
In a flame like hell
Keep disappearing
Until there is none
Survivors I doubt
There will be one
Maybe your heart
This now captures
A very sad tale
Of a box of matches

Good

 

[dogb]

Nice I have seen posts of you every post has some emotion and the way of writing is awesome

Thank u

 

[Anshhi]

Packed so tightly
Very little room
There are many
In this small tomb
May be related
Look all the same
Faceless heads
None with a name
When required
One will disappear
An awful sound
You will now hear
A puff of smoke
A distinctive smell
Ending will come
In a flame like hell
Keep disappearing
Until there is none
Survivors I doubt
There will be one
Maybe your heart
This now captures
A very sad tale
Of a box of matches

Matchsticks are a reflection of us—some burn their entire existence away to be the light in someone else’s darkness, yet they remain forever nameless.

Awesome Intelligence ™​

 

[Dom55]

Packed so tightly
Very little room
There are many
In this small tomb
May be related
Look all the same
Faceless heads
None with a name
When required
One will disappear
An awful sound
You will now hear
A puff of smoke
A distinctive smell
Ending will come
In a flame like hell
Keep disappearing
Until there is none
Survivors I doubt
There will be one
Maybe your heart
This now captures
A very sad tale
Of a box of matches

Awesome. ty for sharing. Keep it up. Quietly it speaks of how easily things—and even lives—can be consumed and forgotten.
A small box, yet it holds a powerful, tragic story.

 

[Divyazzz]

Thank u

Welcome