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Sweet as a sin!

Hangova

Hangova

Wellknown Ace
One hot mistake
On my favorite night,
Was a hi,
Made me high
Like the evening sun
painting shades,
Darkening my sky.
Touching my soul,
Like it was your goal
Lighting me in places that was not to be found!
It's a sin
I know I can make it go
Don't send me sparks
It's a firework in my heart
Is this love?
Maybe not
Once more?
Babe let's go!

(It has a beat to it. If you've caught the rhythm, you are one lucky soul.
I Scribble like I don't care, hope u don't too)
 
Hangova said:
One hot mistake
On my favorite night,
Was a hi,
Made me high
Like the evening sun
painting shades,
Darkening my sky.
Touching my soul,
Like it was your goal
Lighting me in places that was not to be found!
It's a sin
I know I can make it go
Don't send me sparks
It's a firework in my heart
Is this love?
Maybe not
Once more?
Babe let's go!

(It has a beat to it. If you've caught the rhythm, you are one lucky soul.
I Scribble like I don't care, hope u don't too)
Click to expand...
Nice, Your words have a rhythm of their own, turning a fleeting spark into a captivating little story. Keep letting your creativity flow!.. :)
 
Hangova said:
One hot mistake
On my favorite night,
Was a hi,
Made me high
Like the evening sun
painting shades,
Darkening my sky.
Touching my soul,
Like it was your goal
Lighting me in places that was not to be found!
It's a sin
I know I can make it go
Don't send me sparks
It's a firework in my heart
Is this love?
Maybe not
Once more?
Babe let's go!

(It has a beat to it. If you've caught the rhythm, you are one lucky soul.
I Scribble like I don't care, hope u don't too)
Click to expand...
You’ve caught the rhythm... now tell me, should we fan this fire further, or put a stop to it...
 
Hangova said:
One hot mistake
On my favorite night,
Was a hi,
Made me high
Like the evening sun
painting shades,
Darkening my sky.
Touching my soul,
Like it was your goal
Lighting me in places that was not to be found!
It's a sin
I know I can make it go
Don't send me sparks
It's a firework in my heart
Is this love?
Maybe not
Once more?
Babe let's go!

(It has a beat to it. If you've caught the rhythm, you are one lucky soul.
I Scribble like I don't care, hope u don't too)
Click to expand...
So u got fireworks too in English also nice ✨
 
Hangova said:
One hot mistake
On my favorite night,
Was a hi,
Made me high
Like the evening sun
painting shades,
Darkening my sky.
Touching my soul,
Like it was your goal
Lighting me in places that was not to be found!
It's a sin
I know I can make it go
Don't send me sparks
It's a firework in my heart
Is this love?
Maybe not
Once more?
Babe let's go!

(It has a beat to it. If you've caught the rhythm, you are one lucky soul.
I Scribble like I don't care, hope u don't too)
Click to expand...
Caught the rhythm right where it hurts; chaotic feelings like these carry the deepest beauty.
 
Hangova said:
One hot mistake
On my favorite night,
Was a hi,
Made me high
Like the evening sun
painting shades,
Darkening my sky.
Touching my soul,
Like it was your goal
Lighting me in places that was not to be found!
It's a sin
I know I can make it go
Don't send me sparks
It's a firework in my heart
Is this love?
Maybe not
Once more?
Babe let's go!

(It has a beat to it. If you've caught the rhythm, you are one lucky soul.
I Scribble like I don't care, hope u don't too)
Click to expand...
For we guys girls one 'hi' is more then enough. :smoking:
 
Hangova said:
One hot mistake
On my favorite night,
Was a hi,
Made me high
Like the evening sun
painting shades,
Darkening my sky.
Touching my soul,
Like it was your goal
Lighting me in places that was not to be found!
It's a sin
I know I can make it go
Don't send me sparks
It's a firework in my heart
Is this love?
Maybe not
Once more?
Babe let's go!

(It has a beat to it. If you've caught the rhythm, you are one lucky soul.
I Scribble like I don't care, hope u don't too)
Click to expand...
Beautiful... like the conversational poetry style... seems personal and random... scattered thoughts somehow making all sense
 
Hangova said:
One hot mistake
On my favorite night,
Was a hi,
Made me high
Like the evening sun
painting shades,
Darkening my sky.
Touching my soul,
Like it was your goal
Lighting me in places that was not to be found!
It's a sin
I know I can make it go
Don't send me sparks
It's a firework in my heart
Is this love?
Maybe not
Once more?
Babe let's go!

(It has a beat to it. If you've caught the rhythm, you are one lucky soul.
I Scribble like I don't care, hope u don't too)
Click to expand...
I read twice and I feel I can rap or sing it on this as it's almost rythmic.. beautiful
 
Hangova said:
One hot mistake
On my favorite night,
Was a hi,
Made me high
Like the evening sun
painting shades,
Darkening my sky.
Touching my soul,
Like it was your goal
Lighting me in places that was not to be found!
It's a sin
I know I can make it go
Don't send me sparks
It's a firework in my heart
Is this love?
Maybe not
Once more?
Babe let's go!

(It has a beat to it. If you've caught the rhythm, you are one lucky soul.
I Scribble like I don't care, hope u don't too)
Click to expand...
I like the lasttt line tooo much..
 
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