Ek ladki hai

[Asmita2]

Ek ladki hai

jo tumhe bohot pyaar karti hai

jo tumhe bohot yaad karti hai

jo darti hai tumhe khone se

jo darti hai tumhare rone se

jo dil ki baat tumhe keh nahi paati

jo tumhe paane ko tarasti hai

jo khudko tumhari kehti hai

jo tujhe sabse jyada pyaar karti hai

jiski tu mohabbat hai jaan hai

jo tere liye rehti pareshan hai

us ladki se abhi tak bekhabar hai tu,

wo ladki han wo ladki main hi hoon

 

[Anshhi]

Ek ladki hai

jo tumhe bohot pyaar karti hai

jo tumhe bohot yaad karti hai

jo darti hai tumhe khone se

jo darti hai tumhare rone se

jo dil ki baat tumhe keh nahi paati

jo tumhe paane ko tarasti hai

jo khudko tumhari kehti hai

jo tujhe sabse jyada pyaar karti hai

jiski tu mohabbat hai jaan hai

jo tere liye rehti pareshan hai

us ladki se abhi tak bekhabar hai tu,

wo ladki han wo ladki main hi hoon

The twist at the end of the poem is simply brilliant! Very beautiful and emotional writing.

Awesome Intelligence™​

 

[saumunda01]

Ek ladki hai

jo tumhe bohot pyaar karti hai

jo tumhe bohot yaad karti hai

jo darti hai tumhe khone se

jo darti hai tumhare rone se

jo dil ki baat tumhe keh nahi paati

jo tumhe paane ko tarasti hai

jo khudko tumhari kehti hai

jo tujhe sabse jyada pyaar karti hai

jiski tu mohabbat hai jaan hai

jo tere liye rehti pareshan hai

us ladki se abhi tak bekhabar hai tu,

wo ladki han wo ladki main hi hoon

Ek ladka hai...

Jo ye padh kar bewakoofo ki tarah muskura raha hai,

Jo khud ko aaj duniya ka sabse khushnaseeb insaan maan raha hai,

Jo us ladki ke har darr ko hamesha ke liye door karna chahta hai,

Jo uski har khushi aur muskurahat ki wajah banna chahta hai,

Jo ab us ladki ko ek pal ke liye bhi tarpaana nahi chahta,

Aur us 'bekhabar' ladke ko ab poori khabar ho gayi hai...

Aur wo ladka, haan wo ladka ______ hi hai

 

[Asmita2]

The twist at the end of the poem is simply brilliant! Very beautiful and emotional writing.

Awesome Intelligence™​

Thank you so much! I'm really glad the ending resonated with you, your kind words truly mean a lot

 

[Asmita2]

Ek ladka hai...

Jo ye padh kar bewakoofo ki tarah muskura raha hai,

Jo khud ko aaj duniya ka sabse khushnaseeb insaan maan raha hai,

Jo us ladki ke har darr ko hamesha ke liye door karna chahta hai,

Jo uski har khushi aur muskurahat ki wajah banna chahta hai,

Jo ab us ladki ko ek pal ke liye bhi tarpaana nahi chahta,

Aur us 'bekhabar' ladke ko ab poori khabar ho gayi hai...

Aur wo ladka, haan wo ladka ______ hi hai

Awww, ye padhkar dil sach mein muskura Utha, bas hamesha isi tarah uski muskurahat ki wajah bane rehna

 

[saumunda01]

Awww, ye padhkar dil sach mein muskura Utha, bas hamesha isi tarah uski muskurahat ki wajah bane rehna

Haan kaash

 

[Musafir]

Ek ladka hai...

Jo ye padh kar bewakoofo ki tarah muskura raha hai,

Jo khud ko aaj duniya ka sabse khushnaseeb insaan maan raha hai,

Jo us ladki ke har darr ko hamesha ke liye door karna chahta hai,

Jo uski har khushi aur muskurahat ki wajah banna chahta hai,

Jo ab us ladki ko ek pal ke liye bhi tarpaana nahi chahta,

Aur us 'bekhabar' ladke ko ab poori khabar ho gayi hai...

Aur wo ladka, haan wo ladka ______ hi hai 

 

[saumunda01]

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Thankyou brother