Will You Promise - for today? -----------------------------------

[Galaxystar]

Just for today, will you promise me—
You will yearn for me, you will miss me

Like the sun rising on the horizon, my love,
For you I will rise high, daring like a dove

I am ready to sacrifice my whole life to see you smile
Will you also give me your beautiful heart for a while?

I don't want to breathe the air that doesn't carry your perfume
Even if the universe builds castles—impeccable—they're just gloom

Life is barren, full of thorns; nothing gives me pleasure
Your sole presence is enough—why should I long for treasure?

I’ve been solo in this sojourn of an insensitive life till now
Will you bring me bliss, become my soul, and give me your vow?

All my life, I searched for purpose—I want to end this pursuit
They called me crazy—will you accept me, my love, so they refute?

Will you promise me—today and for eternity—we’ll remain together
Our embrace keeps us glued forever, even as we traverse the nether..

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[CuteBubble]

Wonderful!! Loved it!!

Thankk you for sharing such powerful piece of writing

 

[ＥＲＯＳ]

Just for today, will you promise me—
You will yearn for me, you will miss me

Like the sun rising on the horizon, my love,
For you I will rise high, daring like a dove

I am ready to sacrifice my whole life to see you smile
Will you also give me your beautiful heart for a while?

I don't want to breathe the air that doesn't carry your perfume
Even if the universe builds castles—impeccable—they're just gloom

Life is barren, full of thorns; nothing gives me pleasure
Your sole presence is enough—why should I long for treasure?

I’ve been solo in this sojourn of an insensitive life till now
Will you bring me bliss, become my soul, and give me your vow?

All my life, I searched for purpose—I want to end this pursuit
They called me crazy—will you accept me, my love, so they refute?

Will you promise me—today and for eternity—we’ll remain together
Our embrace keeps us glued forever, even as we traverse the nether..

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Yeah... I pomise dear. Not just for today... Until I breath my last.

 

[Sweetheart]

Just for today, will you promise me—
You will yearn for me, you will miss me

Like the sun rising on the horizon, my love,
For you I will rise high, daring like a dove

I am ready to sacrifice my whole life to see you smile
Will you also give me your beautiful heart for a while?

I don't want to breathe the air that doesn't carry your perfume
Even if the universe builds castles—impeccable—they're just gloom

Life is barren, full of thorns; nothing gives me pleasure
Your sole presence is enough—why should I long for treasure?

I’ve been solo in this sojourn of an insensitive life till now
Will you bring me bliss, become my soul, and give me your vow?

All my life, I searched for purpose—I want to end this pursuit
They called me crazy—will you accept me, my love, so they refute?

Will you promise me—today and for eternity—we’ll remain together
Our embrace keeps us glued forever, even as we traverse the nether..

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This is beautifully heartfelt, intensely romantic, and full of raw vulnerability..love it

 

[Juliette]

Just for today, will you promise me—
You will yearn for me, you will miss me

Like the sun rising on the horizon, my love,
For you I will rise high, daring like a dove

I am ready to sacrifice my whole life to see you smile
Will you also give me your beautiful heart for a while?

I don't want to breathe the air that doesn't carry your perfume
Even if the universe builds castles—impeccable—they're just gloom

Life is barren, full of thorns; nothing gives me pleasure
Your sole presence is enough—why should I long for treasure?

I’ve been solo in this sojourn of an insensitive life till now
Will you bring me bliss, become my soul, and give me your vow?

All my life, I searched for purpose—I want to end this pursuit
They called me crazy—will you accept me, my love, so they refute?

Will you promise me—today and for eternity—we’ll remain together
Our embrace keeps us glued forever, even as we traverse the nether..

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Such heartfelt lines, full of promises and deep emotion, really beautiful to read.

 

[Dom55]

I know you wished promise from your special one but the way you have written it , full of romance, reality , love, request, boldness , I see many guys started walking in your direction to give you that promise. Its going to be challenge for you to select one.