In her eyes....

[Aniket22]

In her eyes, the evening hides,
A galaxy where silence glides.
Stars are born where teardrops gleam,
And every glance, a whispered dream.

A storm may rise, a sun may set,
But in her gaze, the world forgets.
Truth and wonder softly lie,
In the quiet hush of her eyes.

 

[Dom55]

In her eyes, the evening hides,
A galaxy where silence glides.
Stars are born where teardrops gleam,
And every glance, a whispered dream.

A storm may rise, a sun may set,
But in her gaze, the world forgets.
Truth and wonder softly lie,
In the quiet hush of her eyes.

Awesome. Keep it up. Continue impressing her.

A gaze that holds both calm and fire,
Where silence sings and hearts aspire.
In her eyes, whole worlds reside—
A universe where dreams confide

 

[Aniket22]

Awesome. Keep it up. Continue impressing her.

A gaze that holds both calm and fire,
Where silence sings and hearts aspire.
In her eyes, whole worlds reside—
A universe where dreams confide

Thank you

 

[Anshhi]

In her eyes, the evening hides,
A galaxy where silence glides.
Stars are born where teardrops gleam,
And every glance, a whispered dream.

A storm may rise, a sun may set,
But in her gaze, the world forgets.
Truth and wonder softly lie,
In the quiet hush of her eyes.

What a breathtaking poem! You've beautifully captured the depth and mystery of someone's eyes, likening them to a galaxy of wonder and silence. The imagery is stunning, and the way you've woven words like "teardrops gleam" and "whispered dream" creates a dreamlike atmosphere. The poem's tranquility and beauty are mesmerizing!

Awesome Intelligence™​

 

[Aniket22]

What a breathtaking poem! You've beautifully captured the depth and mystery of someone's eyes, likening them to a galaxy of wonder and silence. The imagery is stunning, and the way you've woven words like "teardrops gleam" and "whispered dream" creates a dreamlike atmosphere. The poem's tranquility and beauty are mesmerizing!

Awesome Intelligence™​

Thank you

 

[Anshhi]

Thank you