Not my work

[BellaLuna]

Jab mai umer k raste mai
Chup chap bikhar jaata
Ek din bhi agar apni
Tanhayee se dar jaata

Aur mai tarak e taluq par
Zinda hoon so mujrim hoon
Kaash us k liye jeeta
Apne liye mar jaata

Aur us jaan e takkalum ko
Tum mujse tou milwate
Taskheer na kar paata
Hairan tou kar jaata

 

[The_LionHeart❤️]

Jab mai umer k raste mai
Chup chap bikhar jaata
Ek din bhi agar apni
Tanhayee se dar jaata
Aur mai tarak e taluq par
Zinda hoon so mujrim hoon
Kaash us k liye jeeta
Apne liye mar jaata
Aur us jaan e takkalum ko
Tum mujse tou milwate
Taskheer na kar paata
Hairan tou kar jaata

Kya baat hai...
kitni khoobsurati se dard aur jazbaat ke dhaagon se piroyi hui hai aapki ye nazm...

har lafz jaise dil se nikala ho,
aur seedha dil mein utar gaya.
khaas taur par ye panktiyaan

"Kaash us ke liye jeeta, apne liye mar jaata"
kya gahara ehasaas hai isamen...
ishq kee vo inteha jahaan insaan apanee hastee bhee bhula de.

aap bahut khoobasoorat andaaz mein jazbaat bunate hain...

 

[Dom55]

Jab mai umer k raste mai
Chup chap bikhar jaata
Ek din bhi agar apni
Tanhayee se dar jaata

Aur mai tarak e taluq par
Zinda hoon so mujrim hoon
Kaash us k liye jeeta
Apne liye mar jaata

Aur us jaan e takkalum ko
Tum mujse tou milwate
Taskheer na kar paata
Hairan tou kar jaata

Will you accept your love/friend/partner only if his thought s are like you said in your poem?

 

[BellaLuna]

Will you accept your love/friend/partner only if his thought s are like you said in your poem?

Hahah everyone is different... I accept my love/friend/partner as they are......

 

[BellaLuna]

Kya baat hai...
kitni khoobsurati se dard aur jazbaat ke dhaagon se piroyi hui hai aapki ye nazm...

har lafz jaise dil se nikala ho,
aur seedha dil mein utar gaya.
khaas taur par ye panktiyaan

"Kaash us ke liye jeeta, apne liye mar jaata"
kya gahara ehasaas hai isamen...
ishq kee vo inteha jahaan insaan apanee hastee bhee bhula de.

aap bahut khoobasoorat andaaz mein jazbaat bunate hain...

I don't know about the writer of this poem... But I loved it's every Verse that's why uploaded here

 

[Dom55]

Hahah everyone is different... I accept my love/friend/partner as they are......

Thank God. Now I am relaxed. Some ray of hope visible now.

 

[Luna]

Jab mai umer k raste mai
Chup chap bikhar jaata
Ek din bhi agar apni
Tanhayee se dar jaata

Aur mai tarak e taluq par
Zinda hoon so mujrim hoon
Kaash us k liye jeeta
Apne liye mar jaata

Aur us jaan e takkalum ko
Tum mujse tou milwate
Taskheer na kar paata
Hairan tou kar jaata

Beautifully written

 

[vicksuu]

Beautifully written

See same same puppie same.. dats y I got confused nd texted u..

 

[BellaLuna]

See same same puppie same.. dats y I got confused nd texted u..

Hahahah you texted her? Thinking it's me?

Awww Vicksuuu seee you're dumby

 

[BellaLuna]

Beautifully written

Indeed it's beautiful, thanks.

 

[Luna]

See same same puppie same.. dats y I got confused nd texted u..

Haha now i got it lol

 

[Luna]

Hahahah you texted her? Thinking it's me?

Awww Vicksuuu seee you're dumby

Ha he texted me .... I was like i am not the one

 

[BellaLuna]

Ha he texted me .... I was like i am not the one

Hahah you know Telugu?

You should have then replied in Telugu and he would understand it's not Bella

 

[vicksuu]

Hahahah you texted her? Thinking it's me?

Awww Vicksuuu seee you're dumby

Haan i thought she is u..nd named the convo "Dumbiee..!?" ..

 

[vicksuu]

Haha now i got it lol

Hehe sry for the bother

 

[Reshu]

Nice

 

[Luna]

Hahah you know Telugu?

You should have then replied in Telugu and he would understand it's not Bella

I dunno lol

 

[BellaLuna]

Haan i thought she is u..nd named the convo "Dumbiee..!?" ..

Ugh how can you give your name as title to the conversation?..... Hahaha