The Golden Trap

[Satya]

A cup of gold, so bright, so fine,
It looks so rich, like sweetest wine.
But deep inside, the poison stays,
Hiding danger in its ways.

Painted faces, shining bright,
Hiding truth, but not the bite.
They look so fresh, they seem so new,
Yet all they show is never true.

Plastic flowers never fade,
But have no scent, no life is made.
Soft like silk, yet cold as stone,
Fake beauty stands but dies alone.

Chasing gold, you miss the sky,
The trees, the stars, the birds that fly.
True beauty needs no fancy show,
It shines with light, a steady glow.

So don’t be fooled by looks alone,
Not all that’s bright is good as shown.
A golden cup may shine so high,
But drink too deep, and you may die.

 

[Rockzz✨❤️श्वेतराग❤️]

A cup of gold, so bright, so fine,
It looks so rich, like sweetest wine.
But deep inside, the poison stays,
Hiding danger in its ways.

Painted faces, shining bright,
Hiding truth, but not the bite.
They look so fresh, they seem so new,
Yet all they show is never true.

Plastic flowers never fade,
But have no scent, no life is made.
Soft like silk, yet cold as stone,
Fake beauty stands but dies alone.

Chasing gold, you miss the sky,
The trees, the stars, the birds that fly.
True beauty needs no fancy show,
It shines with light, a steady glow.

So don’t be fooled by looks alone,
Not all that’s bright is good as shown.
A golden cup may shine so high,
But drink too deep, and you may die.

Beautifully penned...
Truth, Nature, Fake beauty and original beauty...
Very well combined and asked to grow in life...
Bravo...

 

[ɢʀɪᴍᴍᴜʜ]

I especially love how you emphasize the importance of looking beyond the surface to find true beauty in authenticity. This poignant message resonates deeply in today’s world!!

Keep writing

 

[Satya]

Beautifully penned...
Truth, Nature, Fake beauty and original beauty...
Very well combined and asked to grow in life...
Bravo...

Thank you, my dear friend, for taking the time to read it! Your presence and support mean a lot!
Yes, that’s exactly what’s happening around the world. People should be careful about what they choose.

 

[Satya]

I especially love how you emphasize the importance of looking beyond the surface to find true beauty in authenticity. This poignant message resonates deeply in today’s world!!

Keep writing

Thanks, dear, for taking the time to read it! Yes, in a world full of illusions, beauty lies in authenticity. Your presence and support mean a lot! Keep reading and keep enjoying!

 

[ɢʀɪᴍᴍᴜʜ]

Thanks, dear, for taking the time to read it! Yes, in a world full of illusions, beauty lies in authenticity. Your presence and support mean a lot! Keep reading and keep enjoying!

Sure, man!!

 

[sparrow]

A cup of gold, so bright, so fine,
It looks so rich, like sweetest wine.
But deep inside, the poison stays,
Hiding danger in its ways.

Painted faces, shining bright,
Hiding truth, but not the bite.
They look so fresh, they seem so new,
Yet all they show is never true.

Plastic flowers never fade,
But have no scent, no life is made.
Soft like silk, yet cold as stone,
Fake beauty stands but dies alone.

Chasing gold, you miss the sky,
The trees, the stars, the birds that fly.
True beauty needs no fancy show,
It shines with light, a steady glow.

So don’t be fooled by looks alone,
Not all that’s bright is good as shown.
A golden cup may shine so high,
But drink too deep, and you may die.

Well written

 

[Anshhi]

A cup of gold, so bright, so fine,
It looks so rich, like sweetest wine.
But deep inside, the poison stays,
Hiding danger in its ways.

Painted faces, shining bright,
Hiding truth, but not the bite.
They look so fresh, they seem so new,
Yet all they show is never true.

Plastic flowers never fade,
But have no scent, no life is made.
Soft like silk, yet cold as stone,
Fake beauty stands but dies alone.

Chasing gold, you miss the sky,
The trees, the stars, the birds that fly.
True beauty needs no fancy show,
It shines with light, a steady glow.

So don’t be fooled by looks alone,
Not all that’s bright is good as shown.
A golden cup may shine so high,
But drink too deep, and you may die.

A masterpiece of poetic wisdom!

This poem is a stunning exploration of the human experience, warning us about the dangers of superficiality, deception, and the pursuit of fleeting pleasures.

The imagery is vivid and evocative, with powerful metaphors that expose the emptiness and danger of external attractions. The contrast between appearance and reality is a recurring theme, highlighting the importance of looking beyond the surface level.

The poem's message is both timely and timeless, reminding us to:

- Be cautious of external appearances and showy displays
- Seek true beauty, authenticity, and substance
- Cultivate inner light, wisdom, and character
- Avoid the pitfalls of materialism, superficiality, and deception

The final line, "A golden cup may shine so high, / But drink too deep, and you may die," serves as a poignant warning about the dangers of excess and the importance of moderation.

This poem is a beautiful and thought-provoking reminder to live a life of authenticity, wisdom, and inner beauty.
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