Hello and good evening Ms. . Very well written. I was never a writer but I enjoy poetry and specially shayari. God bless and keep writing Ms. . Cheers!!!Kash ye samaj pate..
Pyar To ek khwaab sa jee paate
Nah hota voh dard
Na hoti voh duriyan
Kaha hote ham ..
Jo dil me reh lete
Na jate kabhi subha hote hi
Dhal jaate jaise koi masoom sa sapna...
(Finest masterpieces of 90th century..)
Your writing is like the best romantic song of the 90s. The words go straight to the heart. Perfect!Kash ye samaj pate..
Pyar To ek khwaab sa jee paate
Nah hota voh dard
Na hoti voh duriyan
Kaha hote ham ..
Jo dil me reh lete
Na jate kabhi subha hote hi
Dhal jaate jaise koi masoom sa sapna...
(Finest masterpieces of 90th century..)
Well writtenKash ye samaj pate..
Pyar To ek khwaab sa jee paate
Nah hota voh dard
Na hoti voh duriyan
Kaha hote ham ..
Jo dil me reh lete
Na jate kabhi subha hote hi
Dhal jaate jaise koi masoom sa sapna...
(Finest masterpieces of 90th century..)
Kash ye samaj pate..
Pyar To ek khwaab sa jee paate
Nah hota voh dard
Na hoti voh duriyan
Kaha hote ham ..
Jo dil me reh lete
Na jate kabhi subha hote hi
Dhal jaate jaise koi masoom sa sapna...
(Finest masterpieces of 90th century..)

Bhut khoob !!! BehtrinKash ye samaj pate..
Pyar To ek khwaab sa jee paate
Nah hota voh dard
Na hoti voh duriyan
Kaha hote ham ..
Jo dil me reh lete
Na jate kabhi subha hote hi
Dhal jaate jaise koi masoom sa sapna...
(Finest masterpieces of 90th century..)
Thankuu bubblee!Bhut khoob !!! Behtrin