Just a lil poem (if in wrong place please move it)

[MickyBlueEyes]

You promised me your love, what you gave was pain
You said you were always loyal, you said you were always true
You were my only sunshine, now all I see is rain
You said you'd keep me happy, so why do I feel so blue?
I think back to our talks and the things we would do
Even with the barriers I had to face
All I wanted was to be with you
Just our happy little family in our own place
I still remember all of our plans, but now you're in another mans hands.

 

[Imagination]

Mickey.. Impeccable way of expression.. Just need to put in some rhyming scheme n figures if speech.. Waiting to read some more from you.

 

[arunbose]

4 tiny lines poem written by me .......

Grasses are green
Roses are red ,
you are mine
till I am dead ....

 

[Bishamonten]

This one made me sad : ) Arun is bringing out old threads, haha.

 

[Freaky]

You promised me your love, what you gave was pain
You said you were always loyal, you said you were always true
You were my only sunshine, now all I see is rain
You said you'd keep me happy, so why do I feel so blue?
I think back to our talks and the things we would do
Even with the barriers I had to face
All I wanted was to be with you
Just our happy little family in our own place
I still remember all of our plans, but now you're in another mans hands.

Takes me back to old memories