Sweet as a sin!

[Hangova]

Meet me at Haveli

Make it Havana

 

[Hangova]

Nope not a compliment, just being your hot mistake !

Can i repeat u twice

 

[Hangova]

I read twice and I feel I can rap or sing it on this as it's almost rythmic.. beautiful

I have no singing nerve in my body else would have put that to a test! Thanks!

 

[Hangova]

Beautiful... like the conversational poetry style... seems personal and random... scattered thoughts somehow making all sense

You caught me!
It was a random superficial thought .

 

[Hangova]

I like the lasttt line tooo much..

Where Tom is, there is always a space for Jerry. Wherever u go I follow.
(Ignoring the hidden meaning is my talent)

 

[Butter Bun]

Can i repeat u twice

Pan cakes have to be baked on both sides yk and mistakes aren’t just to be repeated twice

It should be a twice a night !

 

[cheetra]

You caught me!
It was a random superficial thought .

All of us think in this manner only, yet a few like yourself can pen it the way you did.. commendable

 

[Dom55]

Make it Havana

Done. Such a good girl. Packs my bags,

 

[PunisherSupermanDestroyer]

I will do sin for u even it means destroying every day to become a night and enjoy the night sky with u forever.

Ur Rose buds flows along with me when I am walking in the dark protecting me from the shy stars

 

[Standio]

Love the rhythm feels like a song stopped in halfway. If I got the rights to give an ending, my line would be like:

Babe Just pull the pin,
Let the rush begin!

 

[Hangova]

Love the rhythm feels like a song stopped in halfway. If I got the rights to give an ending, my line would be like:

Babe Just pull the pin,
Let the rush begin!

So here's my partner in crime!

 

[Standio]

So here's my partner in crime!

Yeah I'm in....

 

[AARADHYAA❤️]

That rhythm has a little trouble and temptation mixed in...

 

[Luv4music]

One hot mistake
On my favorite night,
Was a hi,
Made me high
Like the evening sun
painting shades,
Darkening my sky.
Touching my soul,
Like it was your goal
Lighting me in places that was not to be found!
It's a sin
I know I can make it go
Don't send me sparks
It's a firework in my heart
Is this love?
Maybe not
Once more?
Babe let's go!

(It has a beat to it. If you've caught the rhythm, you are one lucky soul.
I Scribble like I don't care, hope u don't too)

Wow keep up bringing more scribble like this

 

[Hangova]

That rhythm has a little trouble and temptation mixed in...

When the temptation has a rhythm of its own you know you are in trouble!

 

[Hangova]

Wow keep up bringing more scribble like this

Thank you!

 

[Luv4music]

Thank you!

Keep up good work

 

[Kanna202]

More

 

[Luv4music]

More

Yes we need more

 

[Luv4music]

Make it Havana

lol