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When the tables turned ..

Solara

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For days, he’d been wrapped in family events....cousins laughing, wedding music, loud uncles, endless food.
And for once, his phone wasn’t glued to his hand.
He still found moments... stolen little pauses... to text her.
Not because he had to, but because she lived somewhere between his heartbeat and habit.

She understood. Of course she did.
So she didn’t complain.
She didn’t sulk.
She didn’t ask for more.

She just… missed him in silence.

Then one morning... her usual routine- hair tied, laptop bag swinging, getting into the shuttle... brain already switching into work mode, he finally had a little time.

And he messaged her like he always did: excited, dramatic, needy, affectionate. as if the last few days hadn’t happened.

She rolled her eyes at her screen like a villain in a rom-com. Typing with the energy of a grumpy cat:

“Look at you. *facepalm* two seconds back and already interrogating me. My peace is destroyed.”

But her heart?
It was laughing.
Smiling so wide the morning sun could’ve sworn she was in love.

"Yeah yeah… I knew it. You were totally fine without me. Peaceful. Happy. No one asking where you are, what you ate, whether you’re alive… bliss, right?”

She rolled her eyes so hard the bus driver could’ve heard it.

Her thumbs moved fast: “Oh please. One person disappears and suddenly you think I’m dancing with freedom and confetti.”

He replied instantly: “Weren’t you? Don’t lie. You finally got a break from my clingy nonsense.”

She scoffed. half offended, half endeared.

The bus turned sharply and she braced one hand on the seat, typing with the attitude of someone who would never admit how much she missed him:

“Look, just because I didn’t cry into a pillow and write poetry about your absence doesn’t mean I didn’t notice.”

He sent a laughing emoji followed by:

“Ah yes. The great Asha. Ice queen. Boss lady. Heart made of work stuff and attitude.”

She smirked. “Correct. And please remember it.”

And she added - sharp, but soft beneath: “Yeah well…. My sanity has officially expired now that you’re back. Congratulations”

His answer: “Good. It never suited you anyway.”

She tried to hold onto her grumpy dignity. Tried to type something equally sarcastic.

But something softened. The kind of softness that doesn’t ask permission. She also knew he'll probably rush out soon, right?

So she took a breath, stared at the blinking cursor, then finally wrote:

“Fine. Maybe I missed you. A little.”

And sent a gif .. of a guy laying in bed with his arms open.. his girl crawls onto him and softly lands herself into his warm hugs.

He replied: “Good. Now stay.”

She closed her eyes.

And just like that, the world around her faded ... the chaos of morning traffic, the steady hum of the engine.

He pulled her close... the way he always imagined doing if distance didn’t exist.

No jokes now. No sarcasm. Just quiet warmth.

He sent one last message: “Holding you.”

She typed: “Closer.”

His reply came fast: “Always.”

And somewhere between two stops.. somewhere between who she pretended to be and who she was with him.. she smiled at the truth she could no longer hide:

She wasn’t just fine without him.

She was brave without him. As usual.

But she was home with him.

Even if that home existed only in messages, stolen moments, and imagined cuddles at 8:12 a.m. on a moving bus.

Some people fall in love. Asha? She argues her way into it. *sighs*
 
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Somewhere in their teasing, somewhere in her stubborn dignity and his clingy chaos, I saw myself. Not as a reader, but as someone who knows what it’s like to pretend you don’t miss someone just to keep your heart from showing too much.

Especially these lines

She wasn’t just fine without him.
She was brave without him. As usual.
But she was home with him.


That hit with the kind of honesty that doesn’t try to impress anyone it just lands straight where it belongs. Because being “fine” isn’t hard. We all know how to survive. But being brave alone and then soft with someone… that’s rare. That’s real.

The way you presented their banter, the sarcasm hiding affection, the petty eye rolls covering tenderness. It felt like watching two people who don’t fall in love dramatically… they recognize each other quietly.

Wow ....!!

Your narration didn’t tell a story.
It made me feel one. Beautifully done @Solara

Carrying your lines longer than I meant to,
Atharv.
 
For days, he’d been wrapped in family events....cousins laughing, wedding music, loud uncles, endless food.
And for once, his phone wasn’t glued to his hand.
He still found moments... stolen little pauses... to text her.
Not because he had to, but because she lived somewhere between his heartbeat and habit.

She understood. Of course she did.
So she didn’t complain.
She didn’t sulk.
She didn’t ask for more.

She just… missed him in silence.

Then one morning... her usual routine- hair tied, laptop bag swinging, getting into the shuttle... brain already switching into work mode, he finally had a little time.

And he messaged her like he always did: excited, dramatic, needy, affectionate. as if the last few days hadn’t happened.

She rolled her eyes at her screen like a villain in a rom-com. Typing with the energy of a grumpy cat:

“Look at you. *facepalm* two seconds back and already interrogating me. My peace is destroyed.”

But her heart?
It was laughing.
Smiling so wide the morning sun could’ve sworn she was in love.

"Yeah yeah… I knew it. You were totally fine without me. Peaceful. Happy. No one asking where you are, what you ate, whether you’re alive… bliss, right?”

She rolled her eyes so hard the bus driver could’ve heard it.

Her thumbs moved fast: “Oh please. One person disappears and suddenly you think I’m dancing with freedom and confetti.”

He replied instantly: “Weren’t you? Don’t lie. You finally got a break from my clingy nonsense.”

She scoffed. half offended, half endeared.

The bus turned sharply and she braced one hand on the seat, typing with the attitude of someone who would never admit how much she missed him:

“Look, just because I didn’t cry into a pillow and write poetry about your absence doesn’t mean I didn’t notice.”

He sent a laughing emoji followed by:

“Ah yes. The great Asha. Ice queen. Boss lady. Heart made of work stuff and attitude.”

She smirked. “Correct. And please remember it.”

And she added - sharp, but soft beneath: “Yeah well…. My sanity has officially expired now that you’re back. Congratulations”

His answer: “Good. It never suited you anyway.”

She tried to hold onto her grumpy dignity. Tried to type something equally sarcastic.

But something softened. The kind of softness that doesn’t ask permission. She also knew he'll probably rush out soon, right?

So she took a breath, stared at the blinking cursor, then finally wrote:

“Fine. Maybe I missed you. A little.”

And sent a gif .. of a guy laying in bed with his arms open.. his girl crawls onto him and softly lands herself into a his warm hugs.

He replied: “Good. Now stay.”

She closed her eyes.

And just like that, the world around her faded ... the chaos of morning traffic, the steady hum of the engine.

He pulled her close... the way he always imagined doing if distance didn’t exist.

No jokes now. No sarcasm. Just quiet warmth.

He sent one last message: “Holding you.”

She typed: “Closer.”

His reply came fast: “Always.”

And somewhere between two stops — somewhere between who she pretended to be and who she was with him — she smiled at the truth she could no longer hide:

She wasn’t just fine without him.

She was brave without him. As usual.

But she was home with him.

Even if that home existed only in messages, stolen moments, and imagined cuddles at 8:12 a.m. on a moving bus.

Some people fall in love. Asha? She argues her way into it. *sighs*
Today, I wont start with negativity. Ask why? God ,what a flow of reality. Sometimes I think while reading , wow, I am so happy ,like I got 2-3 Gulabjamun to eat. Then I remember, I am talking to shopkeeper who owns sweets shop herself .To me its like a fairy tale and doubt whether even ,I deserve such love. And I aint complaining . I know the difference between fact and fiction. But , to be honest I am sure , its possible in your life and wish that happen in real. You deserve it. Marvelous narration, like happening in front of my eyes and I know both characters very well. I remember someone said in earlier episode, OG series started. I hope so. Superb yaar . It looks like you are beyond level of personality who even need tareef. It fells short whatever say about you . Sometime you might thinking , guys here are very generous to say all that . But trust me , its not the case . Yah one time , 2 time you can do it but not always . You touch their /our heart . Though , its true , you immediately run away from heart. Dont stay even for hours , no question of permanent stay. See, I can write thesis , much more longer then your article, that can help me in my PhD in case I attempt in future. But I wont take risk that your fans laugh on me. I am ready to be your fan for always . Dont want any promotion. :cool:
 
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The beauty of this writing lies in its gentle truth it speaks to the hearts of many men who have felt loves quiet pull each word mirrors emotions we have known yet rarely confess it touches the tender line between affection and admiration never crossing into desire only reflecting the warmth of connection that is what makes it deeply relatable a reflection of every heart that has quietly loved and respectfully admired

Happy Sunday & Morning Everyone


@Solara
 
Somewhere in their teasing, somewhere in her stubborn dignity and his clingy chaos, I saw myself. Not as a reader, but as someone who knows what it’s like to pretend you don’t miss someone just to keep your heart from showing too much.

Especially these lines

She wasn’t just fine without him.
She was brave without him. As usual.
But she was home with him.


That hit with the kind of honesty that doesn’t try to impress anyone it just lands straight where it belongs. Because being “fine” isn’t hard. We all know how to survive. But being brave alone and then soft with someone… that’s rare. That’s real.

The way you presented their banter, the sarcasm hiding affection, the petty eye rolls covering tenderness. It felt like watching two people who don’t fall in love dramatically… they recognize each other quietly.

Wow ....!!

Your narration didn’t tell a story.
It made me feel one. Beautifully done @Solara

Carrying your lines longer than I meant to,
Atharv.
Beauty is all in the details :)
 
For days, he’d been wrapped in family events....cousins laughing, wedding music, loud uncles, endless food.
And for once, his phone wasn’t glued to his hand.
He still found moments... stolen little pauses... to text her.
Not because he had to, but because she lived somewhere between his heartbeat and habit.

She understood. Of course she did.
So she didn’t complain.
She didn’t sulk.
She didn’t ask for more.

She just… missed him in silence.

Then one morning... her usual routine- hair tied, laptop bag swinging, getting into the shuttle... brain already switching into work mode, he finally had a little time.

And he messaged her like he always did: excited, dramatic, needy, affectionate. as if the last few days hadn’t happened.

She rolled her eyes at her screen like a villain in a rom-com. Typing with the energy of a grumpy cat:

“Look at you. *facepalm* two seconds back and already interrogating me. My peace is destroyed.”

But her heart?
It was laughing.
Smiling so wide the morning sun could’ve sworn she was in love.

"Yeah yeah… I knew it. You were totally fine without me. Peaceful. Happy. No one asking where you are, what you ate, whether you’re alive… bliss, right?”

She rolled her eyes so hard the bus driver could’ve heard it.

Her thumbs moved fast: “Oh please. One person disappears and suddenly you think I’m dancing with freedom and confetti.”

He replied instantly: “Weren’t you? Don’t lie. You finally got a break from my clingy nonsense.”

She scoffed. half offended, half endeared.

The bus turned sharply and she braced one hand on the seat, typing with the attitude of someone who would never admit how much she missed him:

“Look, just because I didn’t cry into a pillow and write poetry about your absence doesn’t mean I didn’t notice.”

He sent a laughing emoji followed by:

“Ah yes. The great Asha. Ice queen. Boss lady. Heart made of work stuff and attitude.”

She smirked. “Correct. And please remember it.”

And she added - sharp, but soft beneath: “Yeah well…. My sanity has officially expired now that you’re back. Congratulations”

His answer: “Good. It never suited you anyway.”

She tried to hold onto her grumpy dignity. Tried to type something equally sarcastic.

But something softened. The kind of softness that doesn’t ask permission. She also knew he'll probably rush out soon, right?

So she took a breath, stared at the blinking cursor, then finally wrote:

“Fine. Maybe I missed you. A little.”

And sent a gif .. of a guy laying in bed with his arms open.. his girl crawls onto him and softly lands herself into his warm hugs.

He replied: “Good. Now stay.”

She closed her eyes.

And just like that, the world around her faded ... the chaos of morning traffic, the steady hum of the engine.

He pulled her close... the way he always imagined doing if distance didn’t exist.

No jokes now. No sarcasm. Just quiet warmth.

He sent one last message: “Holding you.”

She typed: “Closer.”

His reply came fast: “Always.”

And somewhere between two stops.. somewhere between who she pretended to be and who she was with him.. she smiled at the truth she could no longer hide:

She wasn’t just fine without him.

She was brave without him. As usual.

But she was home with him.

Even if that home existed only in messages, stolen moments, and imagined cuddles at 8:12 a.m. on a moving bus.

Some people fall in love. Asha? She argues her way into it. *sighs*
Winning a fight with love, not logic—that's the true style of love.
Awesome Intelligence
 
For days, he’d been wrapped in family events....cousins laughing, wedding music, loud uncles, endless food.
And for once, his phone wasn’t glued to his hand.
He still found moments... stolen little pauses... to text her.
Not because he had to, but because she lived somewhere between his heartbeat and habit.

She understood. Of course she did.
So she didn’t complain.
She didn’t sulk.
She didn’t ask for more.

She just… missed him in silence.

Then one morning... her usual routine- hair tied, laptop bag swinging, getting into the shuttle... brain already switching into work mode, he finally had a little time.

And he messaged her like he always did: excited, dramatic, needy, affectionate. as if the last few days hadn’t happened.

She rolled her eyes at her screen like a villain in a rom-com. Typing with the energy of a grumpy cat:

“Look at you. *facepalm* two seconds back and already interrogating me. My peace is destroyed.”

But her heart?
It was laughing.
Smiling so wide the morning sun could’ve sworn she was in love.

"Yeah yeah… I knew it. You were totally fine without me. Peaceful. Happy. No one asking where you are, what you ate, whether you’re alive… bliss, right?”

She rolled her eyes so hard the bus driver could’ve heard it.

Her thumbs moved fast: “Oh please. One person disappears and suddenly you think I’m dancing with freedom and confetti.”

He replied instantly: “Weren’t you? Don’t lie. You finally got a break from my clingy nonsense.”

She scoffed. half offended, half endeared.

The bus turned sharply and she braced one hand on the seat, typing with the attitude of someone who would never admit how much she missed him:

“Look, just because I didn’t cry into a pillow and write poetry about your absence doesn’t mean I didn’t notice.”

He sent a laughing emoji followed by:

“Ah yes. The great Asha. Ice queen. Boss lady. Heart made of work stuff and attitude.”

She smirked. “Correct. And please remember it.”

And she added - sharp, but soft beneath: “Yeah well…. My sanity has officially expired now that you’re back. Congratulations”

His answer: “Good. It never suited you anyway.”

She tried to hold onto her grumpy dignity. Tried to type something equally sarcastic.

But something softened. The kind of softness that doesn’t ask permission. She also knew he'll probably rush out soon, right?

So she took a breath, stared at the blinking cursor, then finally wrote:

“Fine. Maybe I missed you. A little.”

And sent a gif .. of a guy laying in bed with his arms open.. his girl crawls onto him and softly lands herself into his warm hugs.

He replied: “Good. Now stay.”

She closed her eyes.

And just like that, the world around her faded ... the chaos of morning traffic, the steady hum of the engine.

He pulled her close... the way he always imagined doing if distance didn’t exist.

No jokes now. No sarcasm. Just quiet warmth.

He sent one last message: “Holding you.”

She typed: “Closer.”

His reply came fast: “Always.”

And somewhere between two stops.. somewhere between who she pretended to be and who she was with him.. she smiled at the truth she could no longer hide:

She wasn’t just fine without him.

She was brave without him. As usual.

But she was home with him.

Even if that home existed only in messages, stolen moments, and imagined cuddles at 8:12 a.m. on a moving bus.

Some people fall in love. Asha? She argues her way into it. *sighs*
Beautiful story
 
Today, I wont start with negativity. Ask why? God ,what a flow of reality. Sometimes I think while reading , wow, I am so happy ,like I got 2-3 Gulabjamun to eat. Then I remember, I am talking to shopkeeper who owns sweets shop herself .To me its like a fairy tale and doubt whether even ,I deserve such love. And I aint complaining . I know the difference between fact and fiction. But , to be honest I am sure , its possible in your life and wish that happen in real. You deserve it. Marvelous narration, like happening in front of my eyes and I know both characters very well. I remember someone said in earlier episode, OG series started. I hope so. Superb yaar . It looks like you are beyond level of personality who even need tareef. It fells short whatever say about you . Sometime you might thinking , guys here are very generous to say all that . But trust me , its not the case . Yah one time , 2 time you can do it but not always . You touch their /our heart . Though , its true , you immediately run away from heart. Dont stay even for hours , no question of permanent stay. See, I can write thesis , much more longer then your article, that can help me in my PhD in case I attempt in future. But I wont take risk that your fans laugh on me. I am ready to be your fan for always . Dont want any promotion. :cool:
Idk what else I can say than just a heartfelt thank you

:inlove:
 
The beauty of this writing lies in its gentle truth it speaks to the hearts of many men who have felt loves quiet pull each word mirrors emotions we have known yet rarely confess it touches the tender line between affection and admiration never crossing into desire only reflecting the warmth of connection that is what makes it deeply relatable a reflection of every heart that has quietly loved and respectfully admired

Happy Sunday & Morning Everyone


@Solara
Thank you and a Happy Sunday to you too :)
 
This is sooo cccuuuttteee and dramatic in the bestest way ❤️ You honestly have a talent for turning tiny lil moments into full on cinematic magic! Alsooo "she tried to hold onto her grumpy dignity" had me giggling. Too cute.

:hearteyes:
 
I'm swooning... for more... I need... no, I crave more... (purposely pulling a 'Solara' now) next chapter, next chapter!! :Laugh1:

Your style of writing so smooth, and so authentic, always gives me reason to stop, and re-read, 2 or 3 or 4 times. Your writing is also always so relatable that always makes wish I had that kind of love myself, or in previous writings that I wish I understood who I was better as a person.

I love your writing, and you are always on my mind.
 
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