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Funny Quotes in the site
.... Imagine a pick up line like: "Hey baby, I'll measure your stalagmite if you enter my cave" IF anyone were to take that first line seriously lol- FeltDaquiri
- Post #99
- Forum: Main Room
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Funny Quotes in the site
"I am hungry for dick please someone put in my side"- FeltDaquiri
- Post #95
- Forum: Main Room
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My First Attempt...
Oh la la.. delicious Nemo .."Your place or mine" is super cliche.. how about "I've a perfect bath for you to soak in at my place, if you'd like to get out of the rain".. or some such... Otherwise, very arousing! xoxox- FeltDaquiri
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- Forum: E-Diaries
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The Journey, Chapt 15
LOVE this Chapter! You captured her innocent glee so aptly with “I got it!” She whispered. “It’s mine!” ..and the intrigue continues....- FeltDaquiri
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- Forum: Literature
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The Journey, Chapt 14
ohh a long lost romance!! :inlove: and Bastian the Grey Wolf seems very cool! ... some minor grammatical questions: Eg: - "there wasn’t… many problems" > singular v plural - "are clever like humes but moved deftly like dwarves" > present v past Is Timtur the name of the squirrel? > maybe...- FeltDaquiri
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- Forum: Literature
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The Journey, Chapt 13
I think it's good that the intensity of 'fury' went down a notch in this chapter. It's hard for a character to maintain that high degree of terribleness all the time, the circumstances warranted some introspection, and personally, i find it difficult to read about his extreme cruelty, so I was a...- FeltDaquiri
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- Forum: Literature
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Unholy Heat - Chapter 1
:giggle::wink: (haha i am still getting the hang of these odd emojicons..but i think you catch my drift;))- FeltDaquiri
- Post #46
- Forum: E-Diaries
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The Journey, Chapt 12
Where did Jonathan come from? - What happened to Blacky?- FeltDaquiri
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- Forum: Literature
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The Journey, Chapt 11
NooOOOooo she can't die!! He just healed her with elvin magic! *crycrycries* :cry1:- FeltDaquiri
- Post #7
- Forum: Literature
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The Journey, Chapter 10
grrr Rubian such a wraith scoundrel...- FeltDaquiri
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- Forum: Literature
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The Journey, Chapter 9
What are these vile conspirators truly after..*eagerly reads on..- FeltDaquiri
- Post #7
- Forum: Literature
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Unholy Heat - Chapter 1
I can't believe this is your first time writing erotica..You are a total natural! .. I especially loved how 'he was the one accustomed to being chased', but by her, he was moved..;) YUMM!! *squirt*, erm i mean 'sweat' emoji ;)@Solara- FeltDaquiri
- Post #44
- Forum: E-Diaries
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and you are clearly not just some 'kid' @Solara o_O ;) *fiyah*!
and you are clearly not just some 'kid' @Solara o_O ;) *fiyah*!- FeltDaquiri
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I'm just on Chapter 9 of The Journey @Nemo:inlove:
I'm just on Chapter 9 of The Journey @Nemo:inlove:- FeltDaquiri
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